The University of Pennsylvania, or Penn, was established in 1790 and is one of the oldest universities in America. This prestigious Ivy League school is known for its top-notch research as well as its undergraduate programs that focus on practical applications grounded in a strong liberal arts foundation. It accepts the Common Application or the Coalition Application and requires a Penn writing supplemental in addition to the general Common/Coalition Application essay. Your supplemental essay helps Penn to gain a more holistic view of you as a potential student. Penn states: “ideal candidates are inspired to emulate our founder Benjamin Franklin by applying their knowledge in ‘service to society.’” Through your Common Application, the admissions committee is aware of your grades and test scores, and understands the level of rigor in your curriculum within the context of your high school environment. Use the supplemental essay as an opportunity to demonstrate how you are an ideal match for Penn and how Penn will help you to accomplish your life goals. Illustrate how you engage with and think about the world around you. Communicate your thoughts, values and perspectives so they can understand what is important to you!
Penn offers a binding early decision option with a November 1st deadline. Consider this option if Penn is your first choice because the rate of admission is higher during early decision. In addition, if you have family alumni ties to Penn early decision may be the best approach. Alumni affiliation receives the most consideration during the early decision program. You are allowed to apply early decision to Penn and early action to other non-binding or non-restrictive early action programs. Always check with the specific schools for guidelines.
Before you sit down to begin writing your essay, do your research to learn as much as possible about Penn’s approach to education. Familiarize yourself with the unique character of the school, go through the website, get a sense of the campus and academic atmosphere, if possible visit the campus, speak with current students, and imagine yourself as a student at Penn. In short, identify what makes the school a good fit for you.
Penn is located in the city of Philadelphia and offers an exceptional education in a diverse urban setting on a primarily residential campus. Penn provides many opportunities for students to investigate various areas of interest. The availability of learning hubs is an example of how it fosters an active and dynamic exploration of ideas. Think about how you might embrace this approach and the overall academic climate at Penn.
It should come as no surprise that Penn is steeped in tradition. Although the curriculum at Penn is flexible, it is grounded in a high quality liberal arts and science foundation. The four undergraduate schools (College of Arts and Science, Penn Engineering, School of Nursing, and The Wharton School) pride themselves on providing an integrated and functional education. “Penn students combine theoretical and practical thinking while developing the tools they need to innovate and lead in a world that demands an increasingly broad perspective.” Consider how these values will impact your experience at Penn.
University of Pennsylvania supplemental application prompts
Penn supplemental essay #1
How did you discover your intellectual and academic interests, and how will you explore them at the University of Pennsylvania? Please respond considering the specific undergraduate school you have selected. (300-450 words)
Was there an “ah-ha!” moment that sparked your intellectual and academic interests? If so, that’s a great place to begin! Don’t be afraid to show your excitement, but ground it in specifics as they relate to the educational experience available to you at Penn. This prompt allows you to discuss how you hope the undergraduate options at Penn will bolster exploration of your interests and how an education at Penn will help you to flourish. Consider why you are a good fit for the undergraduate school of your choice (College of Arts and Sciences, School of Nursing, The Wharton School, or Penn Engineering). What specific academic, service, and/or research opportunities might enhance your journey? Include examples of how your personal experiences make the programs at Penn a good fit for you. How will the opportunities at Penn expand, nurture, and support your interests and aspirations? How do you hope to contribute to the collegiate environment at Penn? Consider how you might positively impact the overall Penn campus community. You need to address why you are driven to attend Penn and how a Penn education will help you to affect change in the world.
Penn supplemental essay #2
At Penn, learning and growth happen outside of the classroom, too. How will you explore the community at Penn? Consider how this community will help shape your perspective and identity, and how your identity and perspective will help shape this community. (150-200 words)
This prompt is new this year and is meant to address the interplay of how you might contribute to and benefit from the extracurricular atmosphere at Penn. You only have 200 words to express what excites you most about the community at Penn, provide some insight into how you might engage with it, and reveal how you might both enhance and grow from it based on your unique identity and perspective. This prompt provides an opportunity to express your cultural background. Consider the diverse population of students and their experiences in light of your own identity and perspectives. Also consider the Penn community within the context of the city of Philadelphia. Remember Penn’s founder Ben Franklin was focused on service to society and that begins with the dynamic community around you and expands from there. Overlay your individual story with the community at Penn. Your response requires you to look at your identity and perspective and consider ways you mesh with the Penn community and how that might affect you and likewise, how you might impact those around you. What do you bring with you based on your life experience? What might you gain though your potential interactions/opportunities/exchanges with those in the community at Penn?
Students applying to duel-degree and specialized programs should address both prompts above in terms of the single-degree school choice in your response. Your interest in the coordinated or specialized program can be addressed in your program-specific essay.
Note additional essays are required if you are applying to one of the Coordinated Dual Degree and Specialized Programs offered at Penn (Computer and Cognitive Science: Artificial Intelligence, DMD: Digital Media Design Program, Huntsman: The Huntsman Program in International Studies and Business, LSM: The Roy and Diana Vagelos Program in Life Sciences and Management, M&T: The Jerome Fisher Program in Management and Technology, NHCM: Nursing and Healthcare Management, VIPER: The Roy and Diana Vagelos Integrated Program in Energy Research, NETS: The Rajendra and Neera Singh Program in Networked and Social Systems Engineering, and The Seven-Year Bio-Dental Program). These responses have limits that range from 400 to 650 words. Although these individual prompts are not addressed in detail here, keep in mind that each one asks you to share specific examples and experiences that demonstrate your potential for success along with your enthusiasm for and attraction to the particular program. These programs are a significant commitment and you need to convey your genuine dedication. The admissions committee uses your essays to determine whether you will be a good match for the particular dual degree or specialized program to which you seek admission.
Final thoughts on applying to Penn
This is a competitive application process and you are up against an increasingly competitive group of applicants. Penn received 44,960 undergraduate applications for the class of 2023. Only 3,345, or a record low of 7.44%, were offered admission (7,110 applied early decision and 1,279, or another record low of 18% were admitted). Here are a few more numbers to consider. Over 90% of the students admitted were in the top 10% of their high school class with average SAT scores of 725 in evidence based reading and writing, 760 in math, and an average ACT score of 34. Effectively communicating the intangibles through your essays is the best way to differentiate yourself in this prestigious crowd. Use your essay responses to discuss what is meaningful to you, project the value you might add to the campus community and convey how Penn is the ideal place for you to achieve your dreams for the future.
Take a deep breath and try not to be intimidated by this process. Start early to allow yourself enough time to thoroughly research, prepare, and complete all aspects of your application. All these factors must come together in a compelling way to present you as a highly competitive applicant. Penn is interested in your personal stories, life experiences, hopes and aspirations. It seeks to attract and foster great thinkers and future leaders who will play constructive roles in society. Take the time and invest the energy to reveal your best self!
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***Disclaimer: Information is subject to change. Please check with individual programs to verify the essay questions, instructions and deadlines.***
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