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November 21, 2018

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Write an MBA Goals Essays that Turns the Adcom into Your Cheerleaders!

Write a Goals Essay that Turns to Adcoms into Your Cheerleaders! Click here to get the complete guide to clarifying and writing about your MBA goals.

By following the advice in the previous post you can create goals that are clear, credible, and convincing, but they won’t necessarily be exciting. They won’t make the adcom reader think as she reads, “Wow, it would be great if he could do that!” And this latter reaction is really what the goals essay should aim for. As all my clients have probably heard me say, you want to make your reader your cheerleader.

To generate such a response, deliver “goals plus” – show how your goals developed from your experience, and describe your motivation and vision for your goals.

  • Experience means when, where, and how your goals developed.
  • Motivation is the pivot point when something gained traction with you. When did you become engaged and captivated in some way so that you wanted to pursue a given path?
  • Vision is the broader impact of achieving the goal, beyond your own immediate efforts.

These three elements are separate words but in actuality will likely be intertwined. Here is a brief example, taken from a sample goals essay:

Last year, when I was in Taiwan advising a global financial services company on consolidating its Asia strategy, I found myself thinking what a shame it was that my relationship with the client proved responsive rather than proactive. With my knowledge of the region’s changing demographic and logistical realities, I could have recommended strategic opportunities a year ago to prevent the client from getting bogged down in redundant acquisitions and incompatible markets. Following that experience, I envisioned a new consulting paradigm resembling primary care medicine, based on a long-term, prevention-focused relationship between the consultant and client.

Adding experience, motivation, and vision turns the goals from static to dynamic. There are three other advantages of “goals plus”:

  1. The experiential basis enhances credibility.
  2. They create a story, which is more engaging and memorable than pure exposition.
  3. Your goals inherently differentiate you; because it’s your story, it’s naturally unique.

Do you need help identifying, defining, and writing about your goals? Work one-on-one with an expert admissions advisor who will help you clarify your goals and present them to the adcom so you get ACCEPTED. Learn more about MBA Admissions Services here.

“Write an MBA Goals Essays that Turns the Adcom into Your Cheerleaders!” is excerpted from the Accepted guide, Why MBA? Click here to download the complete guide.

Read tips on how to answer the MBA Goals Essay Question.

Cindy Tokumitsu, admissions expertCindy Tokumitsu has advised hundreds of successful applicants, helping them gain acceptance to top MBA and EMBA programs in her 20 years with Accepted. She would love to help you too. Want Cindy to help you get Accepted? Click here to get in touch!

 

Related Resources:

• MBA Admissions A-Z: 26 Great Tips, a free guide
• 4 Things To Do If You Can’t Define Your MBA Goals
• How to Clarify Your Goals for Your MBA – And Beyond

Article by Cindy Tokumitsu / MBA Admissions / MBA career goals, Why MBA Series

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