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July 29, 2018

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Creating the First Draft of Your Application Essay

Exemplary Application Essays: How to Write Outstanding Application Essays, learn how to create your first draft

In our How to Write Exemplary Application Essays blog series, you’ll learn how to create outstanding essays by analyzing sample successful application essays.

In the last post in this series, we discussed what makes an essay effective, and reflected on the questions that will help you develop your theme. Now it’s time to start writing.

Before you begin, write an outline, even if it’s only a very informal list of the main points you want to cover. Using the answers to the questions posed in post #2 of this series, you should have a list of experiences, anecdotes, and ideas that you want to include in your essay.

Now let’s break the job down further to keep the task manageable. First, how long is your essay? Grad school application essays can range from as short as 300 words to more than 1,000. Ironically, it’s much harder to write a very short, very good essay than it is to write a very good, longer one. Writing a super-short essay is like being six feet tall and stuck in a coach airline seat – you’re going to feel cramped even when writing as economically as possible.

Assuming you have more leg room, so to speak, and have 750 words, you still have to estimate how much space you will have, approximately, for your introduction, the main body, and conclusion. Dividing your essay into parts like this will help you gauge how much you can afford to write in each section. You can start out by writing a little extra, maybe up to 25 percent above your essay’s word limit in your early drafts, since you will probably be able to trim the fat later on, creating more space for the meat and potatoes of your story. You may only want to follow this rule, though, if you have an editor ready to help you streamline.

In the first and third posts in this series we saw examples of strong introductions. Don’t get hung up on crafting the perfect introduction before moving on to the rest of the essay. If you aren’t confident about your introduction, experiment with different ones, but don’t stay stuck at the beginning. Often, the perfect introduction will come to you when you are well into writing the rest of the essay.

Finally, keep in mind the picture you want to paint of yourself to the admissions committee. As you read your draft, are you getting a sense of that amazing, talented, focused person? Stay focused on how best to paint that picture through your own lively, meaningful examples. Do not just claim to be something without backing it up with evidence.

Summary Tips:

• Make an outline, even if it’s informal.

• Estimate how much space you have for each section of your essay to avoid overwriting.

• Keep working on the body of the essay even if you haven’t perfected the introduction. The introduction does not have to come first!

In the last post in this series, you’ll learn how to revise and polish your exemplary essays.

Work one-on-one with an expert who will walk you through the process of creating a slam-dunk application when you check out our catalog of application services. Our admissions consultants have read thousands of essays and know the exact ingredients of an outstanding essay.

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Related Resources:

• 5 Fatal Flaws to Avoid in Your Statement of Purpose, a free guide
• The Miraculous 15-Minute ROUGH, ROUGH Draft
• Writing a Lead That Pops

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