Approaching the Diversity Essay Question

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Show how your background will add to the mix of perspectives at the college you are applying to.

Many applications now have a question, sometimes optional, geared to encouraging people with minority backgrounds or unusual educational or family histories to write about their background.  If you are an immigrant to the US, the child of immigrants or someone whose ethnicity is a minority in the US, you might find this question an interesting one to show how your background will add to the mix of perspectives at the college you are applying to. If you are applying after having an unusual experience for applicants like joining the military, becoming part of a dance troupe, or caring for an elderly relative, you can use your experience to evoke the way in which you will bring diversity to campus.

Your family’s culture, situation and traditions, and the way they have helped you develop particular character and personality traits are of interest, as well unusual experiences that have shaped you. Perhaps you have grown up with a strong insistence on respecting elders, attending family events or learning your parents’ native language and culture. Perhaps you are close to grandparents and extended family who have taught you how teamwork can help everyone survive. Perhaps you have had to face and deal with difficulties that stem from your parents’ values being in conflict with those of your peers. Perhaps teachers have not always understood the elements of your culture or outside-of-school situation and how they pertain to your school performance. Perhaps you have suffered discrimination and formed your values and personality traits around your success in spite of the discrimination. Perhaps you have learned skills from a lifestyle that is outside the norm–living in foreign countries as the child of diplomats or contractors, performing professionally in theater, dance, music or sports, or communicating with a deaf sibling.

Understanding and explaining how your experience built your empathy for others, a strong will, and character is a good focus for the diversity question.

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  • Vincen Mathai

    Hi

    I am a Indian , who was brought up in the Middle East for 17 years of my life.

    I have met and interacted with people from many countries and cultures in those years. I have used this exposure to a great extent in extracurricular activities such as Model UN events, Work as School student president and other competitions . Living in a racially and culturally diverse country, I have watched and learned everything I could about Global pop culture, current affairs and cultural topics .

    In addition, in my current job I interact daily with clients and employees based in around 15-18 countries.

    Also I belong to a Syrian christian community , which is minority in India.

    Can I use these points to differentiate my profile from the other Indian applicants in an optional essay to show how I can add to the diversity of a college , even though I come from an over-represented nationality ?

    • http://www.accepted.com Linda Abraham

      Hi Vincen,
      Certainly, but don’t just list these circumstances. You need to dig deeper and analyze how these factors have influenced you as an adult and as a professional? Does the fact that you have been part of a minority culture most of your life affect the way you treat others? If so how Give an example. How does the fact that you grew up in the Middle East enrich or change you?
      The facts give you an opportunity to differentiate yourself. Don’t be superficial and you will use the opportunity well.
      Best,
      Linda