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Okay, you’ve calmed down after your initial essay-writing anxiety, and you still don’t know where to begin. How do you capture your whole life in the meager number of characters allotted?

What is clustering?

Whether you’re feeling stuck or feeling overwhelmed by all the ideas bouncing around in your head, a stellar technique to start with is called clustering, also known as mind mapping. Clustering is a visual form of brainstorming that allows you to free associate around a chosen topic. Although it can seem random on the surface, it usually reveals deep connections. It’s perfect for excavating the personal experiences you’ll want to draw on to enliven your essay.

How to make a cluster (or mind map) for your personal statement

• Step 1: 10 seconds

  Take a blank sheet of paper, write your name in the middle of it, and draw a circle around it. Alternatively, you could use one of the many online mind mapping programs, some with free trials, or even a large drawing pad.

• Step 2: 5-10 minutes

  Free associate from your name, writing down words as they come (include feelings, ideas, memories, experiences, accomplishments, sensations – anything goes). Create a new branch or cluster for each new theme that emerges, using lines to connect the words. Most people experience an “aha moment” after about 7 minutes.

• Step 3: 5 minutes

  Review your cluster and write for 5 minutes to synthesize your findings. What do you notice? Any patterns? Surprises? What items are you passionate about? You might want to go back and highlight areas you believe will be useful for your personal statement.

Total time invested: 10-20 minutes

A painless, quick exercise, and it’s likely that you’ve uncovered a theme for your essay along with a wealth of supporting examples!

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Related Resources:

• 5 Fatal Flaws to Avoid in Your Grad School Application Essays, a free guide
• Writing a Lead That Pops
• First Drafts of Personal Statements: Let Yourself Go