Harvard Business School 2009 Essay Tips and Deadlines
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Harvard Business School MBA Application Deadlines
Application Submission Notification Date
Round 1 October 15, 2008 January 21, 2009
Round 2 January 6, 2009 April 2, 2009
Round 3 March 11, 2009 May 13, 2009
Harvard Business School MBA Essay Instructions and Questions
All applicants must submit answers to four essay questions. The first two questions are required of all applicants. The remaining two essays may be in response to your choice of the next four sub-questions.
Joint program applicants for the Harvard Medical School, Harvard Law School, and Kennedy School of Government must provide an additional essay.
Essays Questions:
1. What are your three most substantial accomplishments and why do you view them as such? (600-word limit)
This is practically Harvard's signature question. It has been around for years and it goes to the heart of Harvard's values. It wants highly accomplished students entering its program. It wants leaders.
At least one and probably two of the three accomplishments should show leadership and/or teamwork with the emphasis being on leadership. I also like to have this essay show some breadth. My ideal would be to have one professional, one community, and one personal accomplishment in this essay, but that breakdown is neither set in stone nor imperative.
2. What have you learned from a mistake? (400-word limit)
People of initiative err. They must learn from those mistakes to be effective leaders.
A friend went to her daughter's graduation and quoted the valedictory address, "In school you learn lessons and then take tests. In life, you have tests and then learn lessons." If you view your mistakes as experiments, lessons, or tests, you can grow and make sure you don't repeat them. Show HBS through this essay that you are the kind of person who learns from your mistakes.
Again, try to have this question reveal you making your mistake, preferably in a leadership capacity, and applying lessons learned in a sphere of your life not covered by other essays. In the best HBS applications, each essay uncovers a different facet of the applicant and his or her experience. Together they paint a portrait of a dynamic, talented leader with initiative and exceptional ability.
3. Please respond to two of the following (400-word limit each):
1. What would you like the MBA Admissions Board to know about your undergraduate academic experience?
This question was optional last year and mandatory the year before that. When introduced, I thought it was going to produce monotonous, boring essays, but it didn't. To my pleasant surprise, I reviewed several of these essays as part of our quality control program, and they were revealing, excellent essays.
This question reflects Harvard's interest in early career applicants and really gives them a chance to shine. This essay represents HBS' attempt to see patterns over time. What you choose to include here will obviously vary depending on your experience and the rest of your application, but my ideal answer will discuss a leadership experience from your undergrad career to show that you are a natural leader with a history of leadership. Remember: HBS wants to develop leaders, not create them.
2. Discuss how you have engaged with a community or organization.
New question. As you answer this question, once again keep in mind Harvard's single-minded focus on leadership. Did you motivate, inspire, plan, or organize? If you did, what were the results of your actions? Did you increase revenue? membership? communal impact? "Community or organization" is very broad so you could answer this question and relate it to work, but most of you will want to answer this question with non-professional initiatives in your community.3. What area of the world are you most curious about and why?
New question. If you are curious about a region, that curiosity should manifest itself in action. Visiting is one form of action, but it is not the only one. Also, don't neglect to answer the "Why" part of the question. Harvard seeks to understand what makes you tick.
4. What is your career vision and why is this choice meaningful to you?
Harvard is one of the few, if not the only, top business school that has made the goals question optional. And even this one is a little different than the typical "What do you want to do and why do you want to do it?" The interesting twist to Harvard's question is "career vision." With Harvard's focus on strategy, Harvard is asking you to develop your career strategy and discuss its importance to you. But don't leave your answer on an entirely theoretical plane. Bring it down to earth with your plan for implementing that vision. In other words writing that you seek "a career leading an innovative enterprise, providing work-life balance, and allowing me the opportunity to contribute to my community" sounds great. But it will also sound a lot like other people's visions. You need to have some idea of how to achieve that vision, define it more narrowly, and explain why it resonates with you.
For more on the concept of vision, please see "The Parable of the Three Stone Masons."I believe that HBS is attempting to identify those who are like the third stonemason -- perhaps with less religious fervor but with well... that kind of vision. They are still working hard, with feet on the ground, but they radiate enthusiasm for a distant goal and pride in their ability to contribute to something much larger than themselves.
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As indicated above, a vision is much larger than a goal. I think it has to do with creating something bigger than a career or livelihood for one's family. It has to do with contribution on a grander scale. It usually will relate to long-term goals and motivation.
I'm not sure you have to discuss offerings at HBS; their questions don't reflect much interest in your regurgitating their course catalog.
I agree with your final sentence.
Good luck!
Yes. Earning a certificate in a management related field and earning high marks in these classes can help a mediocre GPA. As you note, however, it is not the only factor.
Best,
Linda
Best,
Linda
I am a military applicant with exceptional credentials in active combat and International assignment.I was a team leader of an UN military observer in a UN Peace Keeping Mission and was awarded the commendation card for exemplary contribution to peace keeping. I have a GMAT Score of 770.
I have just completed three of my four essays for HBS. I have narrated exceptional examples of leadership. My first essay is 820 words length and my career vision essay is close to 650 words length. If I try to cut more words,the essays are losing its connection to the greater theme that I want to convey through my application.
My essays are gripping tales and aren't mere collection of platitudes. Will I still be penalized for exceeding the word limit?
Thanks
The content will have to be unusually compelling for them to overlook the fact that you are 1/3 over the word limit in the first essay and more than 50% over the word limit in the second case.
I urge you to have your essays reviewed or at least get an estimate on the time required to improve them. If your editor feels they really can't be cut, then you simply decide whether to take the risk or not. No charge. If the editor feels they can be cut, and they almost always can, then you reduce your risk of ticking off HBS by submitting essays that virtually ignore their word limits.
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thanks
legend
Personally, I think you are OK if your content is good and the essays are well-written.
Best,
Linda
Just a small query on similar lines...is it *almost* ok to exceed the word limit by 15-20 words in maximum one/two of the essay (like 600-words one)...or should it also be preferably avoided.
I am in the process of putting the finishing touches on the essays for the Harvard Business School application. I haven't really talked to all that many people about my chances of getting in, mostly because it is not typical for someone in my professional position to seek this kind of change. Anyhow, I will give you a rundown of my stats and background.
-From a small country in Central America (I know, they're all small!)
-3.5 from top 3 university (HYP) and a prestigious major at that institution
-Notable independent academic work
-710 GMAT
-Graduated with okay grades (around a 3.1) from a top 5 law school
-Finance attorney for a major international law firm
-Strong extracurricular activities in college
-A lot of community involvement
-Some experience with a start up
-Co-founded a monthly online international affairs publication
-27 years old
Am I competitive for HBS?
Thanks.
Yes. You have a competitive profile for HBS. Your law school GPA is a little weak, but everything else is competitive.
The adcom doesn't sit there and count words. They are way too busy to do that. Make sure every word counts, and I wouldn't worry about those extra 10-15 words on a 600 word essay.
Linda Abraham
I didn't mention this in the previous post because I wanted to see if you identified the weakness, which you did. I have heard contradictory things about how HBS and other top business schools treat performance at a professional program. Some say they treat it as work experience so that they can compare apples to apples (compare candidates' academic performances in college rather than comparing college grades with professional school grades). Others say they treat it as both. If they look at it carefully, should I address it (if it is addressable)?
I was wondering how many words should be dedicated to describing the vision and how many words on my personal experience. 440 words (with 10% over limit) is a very tight constraint. Is it very risky to not mention "why HBS" at all?
They will weigh everything they have. Your law school will be a factor. They may wonder why your grades went down. Were there extenuating circumstances? Are those circumstances history or still at play? Did you not like it? If so, how do they know you will like b-school?
Depending on the reason for your law school performance, you are probably best off addressing it.
Since law school is primarily an academic exercise I would be surprised if they treat it as work experience. They will view it as additional information on your academic side.
Best,
Linda
It is a little difficult to give even a guideline on this, but I would probably say up to 25% in describing the vision and the rest on other elements of the question.
Because of the questions wording and the tight limit, I recommend against explicitly addressing "why HBS," but I also recommend that your answer to this question (and the others) reflect fit with HBS. In other words, implicitly your entire application should answer Why HBS.
Best,
Linda