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Michigan Ross MBA Essay Tips

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Michigan Ross' Application Submission Deadlines:

November 1, January 7, March 1 

The Michigan Ross 2007 Essay Questions:

Required Questions
You must answer all parts of the three questions below. (Each essay has a 500-word maximum.)

1. We believe one of the keys to effective leadership is the ability to transform ideas into action. Describe a time within the last three years in which you exercised such leadership. What did you learn about your leadership strengths and development needs?

This question is slightly changed from last year when it emphasized leadership as being "through people." I wouldn't let that change fool you. Leadership requires followers, among other things, and those followers are almost always two-legged. 

Last year this question also emphasized professional leadership. Ross has now given you leeway to use a non-professional example if you feel an extra-curricular activity provides your best leadership example. At the same time, keep in mind that some if not most of your essays should refer to professional experience.

Finally, include the lessons your learned both about your leadership strengths and about leadership areas you need to develop, and make sure you answer all parts of the question, just as the instructions say. And one last tip: Given Ross'  multi-disciplinary action projects (MAP), the ideal response would be multi-disciplinary.

2. What are your career goals? How will a Ross MBA help you achieve your goals? How might the action-based learning aspects of the Ross curriculum make a difference?

This used to be #3 and Ross has clarified it for this year. Made it a little more straightforward. Note again the  action-based part of the question. What do you want to do after your MBA, and how will the Ross MBA help you attain that end. Do you homework about Ross. Know what MAP, M-trek, and other Ross programs are. Which do you want to take advantage of?  This is the essay where you can show that you have really done your homework about Ross.

3. Describe the initiatives you have taken over the past two years to develop professionally and personally. What motivated you to take those initiatives?

The second sentence in this question is new this year, and like #1, this question has also changed from a strictly professional question to one allowing for a personal or professional response.

This question is pretty straightforward, but not easy. When have you taken initiative to develop new skills, hobbies, or interests? When have you pushed yourself to change or improve? Examples could be leadership or professional training, assumption of responsibility at work, development of "soft" skills you need for a volunteer position, sports team, or band, joining Toastmasters, or a number of other developmental activities. The examples are endless, but remember to discuss your motivations for pursuing this personal growth.

Optional Question
Is there anything else you think the Admissions Committee should know about you to evaluate your candidacy? (500-word maximum)

Do not use this essay like a storage room, my son's bedroom closet, or even a large salad: a place to put everything.  Focus on one facet of your life or experience that is important to you,  reveals the human being you are and isn't described in other parts of the application. Write about it here.

You can of course also use this essay to "explain" a weakness, but I hate to end your application on that note if it can be avoided. So weigh your options. If you have something to explain, do so. If you can tuck the explanation somewhere else in the application, more power to you. If the  best place for the explanation is this last essay, so be it.

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Posted on Tuesday, August 15, 2006 at 02:34PM by Registered CommenterLinda Abraham in , | Comments10 Comments | References3 References

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Dear Linda,

Great analysis!
I have a question about essay 1 Leadership: Is it ok to mention areas I want to develop and specific things at Ross that would help me do so that is unique to Ross (e.g. RLP or specific leadership course)?

Thanks!
November 20, 2006 | Unregistered CommenterRoss applicant
Thanks for the feedback. I would prefer that essay one stick with answering the question asked including "what are your [leadership] developmental needs, which leads up to the answer to #2: Why Ross?
November 21, 2006 | Registered CommenterLinda Abraham
Thanks a lot!
November 24, 2006 | Unregistered CommenterRoss applicant
Hi Linda,

Thank you very much for the valuable insight. I have a question.
Which essay would you recommend that an applicant use to highlight his/her potential contributions to the Ross community?
January 1, 2007 | Unregistered CommenterRoss applicant
Several. IN #1, you can show the leadership qualities that you will bring to Ross. In #2 you can discuss how you will participate at Ross and thereby contribute to MAP and other action-based learning initiatives. If the initiatives you mention in #3 relate to groups, projects, or activities at Ross, you will again be highlighting how you can contribute, not to mention the fact that you will be showing you have initiative, a quality that you will bring with you to Ross. And if your optional essay reveals valuable attributes, it too will show how you can contribute to Ross.
January 1, 2007 | Registered CommenterLinda Abraham
Linda

Thank you.
January 2, 2007 | Unregistered CommenterRoss applicant
Hi Linda,

Though Fall 08 questions are not out yet, going through your commentary on these previous questions helps tremendously.

Hypothetically, would using non-professional examples for both question 1 and 3 be too much? Would tying them to the Ross experience help?

Thanks!
July 14, 2007 | Unregistered CommenterAnxious 08 applicant
Thanks for the feedback.

First of all #3 asks for both "personal and professional." If you just wrote about the personal, a reader might assume that you didn't take any steps to develop professionally in the last two years. Not good.

For #1, if your best leadership example is not professional, a personal one will do.

Obviously we are both assuming the questions don't change.

Good luck!
July 16, 2007 | Registered CommenterLinda Abraham
Hi,

If as a re-applicant, we need to use the additional information question to post the cover letter, then could be still mention goals using the essays.

We are expected to answer one or more of the "new" application essay questions? Any suggestions on the pick?

Regards,
Ram
January 1, 2008 | Unregistered CommenterRam
Ram,

I'm really sorry, but I don't understand your question.

Linda
January 2, 2008 | Registered CommenterLinda Abraham

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