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Personal Statement Tip

Last night my husband and I attended a memorial service for our son-in-law’s grandmother, who passed away recently. Our son-in-law, Stephen, spoke warmly of his grandmother, but both in his talk and afterwards when we spoke privately, he commented on how hard it is to capture an individual or a lifetime in a short talk. I would add, “in an essay.”

That, of course, is exactly your challenge. And if you approach your task with a certain amount of dread, realize you are not alone. It is difficult.

Here are some tips, which Stephen followed -- without even asking me for advice.

  1. Focus on a few key qualities. You can’t discuss all facets of your personality and experience. You are infinitely faceted. Choose between one to three qualities. Then…Focus. Focus. Focus.
  2. Illustrate the points you want to make with brief anecdotes or examples. Make yourself real. Let your reader experience a vignette that embodies the attribute you are portraying.
  3. Banish from your mind resumes in prose, biography, and even a chronology of your life. You want to present a snapshot or perhaps 3-frame collage.

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